July 21, 2002

Novels and Fiction: Wherefore Art Thou (Chapter 16-22) (Comments Off)

Wherefore Art Thou (Chapter 16-22) by i_wanderer@yahoo.com: Hana Yori Dango
*sigh* This fic is wild!! Too many things going on and I wanna know what happens next! After I read chapter 23, that would be it. I still hafta wait for the next parts. I hope the author hurries on writing it.

True Self by Phoenix: Ranma 1/2; PG-13 for evil deeds and violence
Read the first paragraph and I must say it kinda bore me. It’s nicely written with such deep and descriptive words, yet it’s not catchy. I guess the author’s writing style isn’t my type. Here’s a summary of the fic: What if not everyone is what they seem? What if most of the people Ranma knows care a secret? One about to be revealed? What if that secret was going to change his live in ways he never imagined? Of course, he has to survive long enough for that to happen. Sounds interesting, ne? Mind you, if you’re not the type to read a long serious fic then don’t bother. Looks promising though…for the others.

24 by Azurite: Sailor Moon
Too much description, driving the fic to a slow pace. There are times when you need to remove words or sentences that are not very much important or need at all. I guess it’s the writing still, but I don’t prefer fics like that. The descriptions are okay though since they weren’t deep. Hmm…let’s just say there’s too much emphasis on every object, person, event, etcetera. I wish I could tell you what the fic is about, but sorry…as I said, I hardly read it. Visit the author’s site — http://www.geocities.com/sailor_andromida.

(Untitled fic) by Baine: Sailor Moon
A young woman with luminous blue eyes and golden blond hair held in place by an iridescent hair claw murmured her thanks as she stood up and shook the balding, pot-bellied principal’s callused hand before straightening her pale blue shirt and leaving his office, entering the hallways of Lunar High School.
Notice the running sentence?

There are several grammar errors (I ain’t good with grammar, but I can recognize what’s wrong or not.

I ain’t perfect. *lol*) and the story pace is a bit fast. Usagi’s OOC and…ME DON’T LIKE!

She’s got this annoying attitude…well…what can I say? She says one time in the fic that she grew up. ^_____________^V I make it look like everything’s real, ne? I don’t know if this fic was ever continued. SMRFF problems. I guess I just have to contact the author or check her site.

(Originally posted on facing reality — strawberry.yoll.net)