July 19, 2002
Novels and Fiction: Things to Come (Chapter 5) (Comments Off)
Things to Come (Chapter 5) by chelle815: Hana Yori Dango
^_^v I didn’t get the e-mail addy of the author, but I already commented on this story before so just look for it in the previous posts. Anyways, chapter 5 is a cliffhanger!!
EVIL CHELLE815! *snickers* Just kidding! Did Tsukasa remember everything when he read the letter? Hmm…it wasn’t mentioned _yet_ what letter it was. It’s probably a wedding invite from Tsukushi. O_o’ Still nicely written here and I like the excitement placed on this fic. The kids are questioning their parents about the story of each. Tsukushi did share her past, but Tsukasa…still the stubborn guy…he never explained anything to his son. Oh yeah, won’t forget the good part in this chapter.
Something’s going on between Tsukushi’s daughter and Tsukasa’s son. *wicked grin* History repeats itself? Things to Come (Chapter 6) by chelle815: Hana Yori Dango
OMG! He did remember!!! It wasn’t a wedding invitation after all! *gyah* It would have been nice if he just went back to her after reading the letter, ne? But it was too late ‘coz he already has a wife. >P Such a sad, sad fate. Matte…why am I sharing you this?! You should read it!
No complaints on this chapter, but there are some grammar errors. Can’t be helped on that part. Sometimes you can miss small things when editing. Great cliffhanger, btw. Makes me wanna read more!
Things to Come (Chapter 7) by chelle815: Hana Yori Dango
Last chapter for tonight. Found a few grammar errors again, nothing big but noticeable. Something’s coming, I think. Good thing this would be the last chapter tonight ‘coz the cliffhanger isn’t that much exciting. *sweatdrop* I like the way the story is written. It is completely to the point, unlike the others with lots of adjectives. Welps, you get what I mean.
(Originally posted on facing reality — strawberry.yoll.net)
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